Jason (jcreed) wrote,
Jason
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I turned. Why yes, girl with chestnut hair cropped to your chin and a red t-shirt with the word “BAM!” printed in mustard yellow, I am into data visualization.


I did not write this pair of sentences, but I feel in me a sense of syntactic kinship to them. They are from this short story that I have not yet finished.

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ETA: Hrm, it gets a bit cheesy pretty soon after that extract. We'll see if it recovers.

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Eh, not really. It got off to such a great start.
Tags: books, short stories
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