The one counterexample I was thinking of for how natural deduction identifies some proofs that focusing doesn't was (with all of P,P',Q,Q' meant to be positive atoms, with ^ being up-shift) x : P, f : P → ^P', y : Q, g : Q → ^Q' |- P' * Q'. In natural deduction, there's only apparently one proof of this, namely the pair (f x, g y). In a focused sequent calculus, I can left-rule up f x and g y in an order independent of each other.
The mistake, I think, is that positive atoms, like other positive connectives, should really have some kind of closed-scope elim, which in natural deduction would enforce the ordering. If all the atoms were negative, and I jiggled around the shifts appropriately, there would be only one sequent proof.