It's not particularly legible, but I sort of like its awkward spots.
Compare it with this guy, another sample of what I used as inspiration:
Something that's bugged me for a long time is this: How many paths, starting at the origin, taking N steps either up, down, left or right, end up at…
Didn't sleep well. Long day of work. Dinner with akiva at hanamichi.
K was going to do a thing for her dad's birthday, but scheduling kept slipping and slipping so I guess we're going to try doing it tomorrow instead.